BriannaBleach

Note: *See previous journal entry for more details. This is not suppose to be perfectly done and I apologize in advance if you or someone you know has experienced something like this... Enjoy, and thank you for reading.*       On my way to work, I stopped by the old bridge to gaze at the clear water streaming bellow. It was spring and the pink flowers decorated the trees above. I watched as fish swam upstream, chasing each other as if in a game of tag. There was a feeling of relaxation and peace surging through my body. I felt, for those few moments, one with nature. I love times like this. There wasn't anyone else around, which is unusual,

How does this sound for a short story? Title: Let Love Kill Summary:    Not too long after getting happily married, the husband plummets into a deep depression, making the decision that he truly no longer wants to live. He loves his wife so much, but that's no longer stopping him from doing what he really wants to do. She sees the signs and knows something's up. She tries to talk to him, to help him, but all it does is drag her down with him. They decide to go out together, but the wife just can't do it. She pleads her husband not to… It's too late. The next morning, she wakes up to a cold, lifeless body. She mourns over his death